You have a killer logline. The concept is ironclad. You spent weeks on the pitch, and everyone who hears it says, "I'd watch that!" Then you write the first draft . It stalls out halfway through Act II. The stakes feel flat. The characters are talking, but nothing is happening . You send it out, and the script coverage  comes back with one devastating critique: The protagonist is passive. As Script Doctor MD , I've analyzed thousands of screenplays. While writers struggle wit